Friday, April 29, 2011

How not to structure a sentence in your sermon

From the wedding speech at Prince Willie's wedding:
As we move towards our partner in love, following the example of Jesus Christ, the Holy Spirit is quickened within us and can increasingly fill our lives with light. This leads to a family life which offers the best conditions in which the next generation can practise and exchange those gifts which can overcome fear and division and incubate the coming world of the Spirit, whose fruits are love and joy and peace.
I have no idea what this means.

But let me try and flowchart it for you.
h/t Bainsey on fb

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